Look at this stuff.
Isn't it neat?
Wouldn't you think my composing’s complete?
Wouldn't you think I'm the guy
The guy who knows editing?
Look at this trove,
Revisions untold
How many markings can one paper hold?
"Sure, he catches everything."
I've done papers and letters a-plenty
I have written those blog-posts galore
You want remediations?
I've done twenty!
But who cares?
No big deal.
I want more.
I wanna be like those theorists are I wanna think, think about my process
Reading ‘bout blogs and - what do you call 'em?
Oh - tweets!
Just fixing grammar won’t get you far.
More is required for good revising
Making notes will help your - what's that word again?
Peeps.
Up where they work… on magazines,
Up where they publish all the great books,
Composing free - wish I could be
Part of that world
What would I give if I could live out of these textbooks?
What would I pay to spend a day just practicing?
Bet'cha Bitzer would understand Bet he’d get my situation
Bright young writer, sick of revising
And ready to know what great editors know
Ask them my questions and get some answers
What are good ideas and why do they - what's the word?
Burn?
When's it my turn?
Wouldn't I love, love to practice in that world up above?
Out of the theory
Wish I could be
Part of that world.


Absolutely BRILLIANT! I love this Michael. :)
ReplyDeleteDitto for sure. =)
ReplyDeleteLOVE!!! haha
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